Appropriate institutional title for Warner
Brothers at the start and then a title using colour and appropriate font . A production company logo could be added. Ambient sound of
birdsong is added to create an atmosphere of suburbia and a range of shots
demonstrate continuity editing. As the edit builds through a range of shots of
the detective walking the voice-over establishes the narrative in the
convention of film noir. The voice-over sets up the enigma and a close up then
reveals his state of mind. Transitions
are used well such as a fade to black to indicate the end of the
introduction.
The next scene is in a bar and shows
proficiency in scripting and storyboarding and organizing actors, settings and
props. Careful attention is given to
filming a range of shots. Music enhances meaning further and codes and
conventions of the genre are clearly followed. The enigma is then set up with
the femme fatale raising the issue which will then drive the narrative.
Evidence of proficiency in most of the skills
and clearly fulfills the task.
45/50
